{"id":1967,"date":"2026-02-23T02:15:54","date_gmt":"2026-02-23T02:15:54","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/toeflpreps.com\/?p=1967"},"modified":"2026-02-23T02:18:33","modified_gmt":"2026-02-23T02:18:33","slug":"colon-semicolon","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/toeflpreps.com\/ko\/grammar\/colon-semicolon\/","title":{"rendered":"TOEFL Writing \uace0\ub4dd\uc810\uc744 \uc704\ud55c \uc911\u00b7\uc0c1\uae09 \ud45c\ud604: \ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

TOEFL Writing\uc5d0\uc11c \uace0\ub4dd\uc810\uc744 \ubc1b\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

\uba3c\uc800 \uc804\uc81c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc810\uc740 TOEFL\uc774 \uc601\uc5b4 \ub2a5\ub825 \uc2dc\ud5d8\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud3c9\uac00\uc758 \ud575\uc2ec\uc740 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc758 \uae4a\uc774\ubcf4\ub2e4\ub294 \uc601\uc5b4 \ud45c\ud604\uc744 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \uc790\uc5f0\uc2a4\ub7fd\uace0 \uc815\ud655\ud558\uac8c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uac00\uc5d0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc548\ud0c0\uae5d\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc544\ubb34\ub9ac \uae4a\uc774 \uc788\ub294 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub354\ub77c\ub3c4 \uc810\uc218\uc5d0 \ud06c\uac8c \ubc18\uc601\ub418\uc9c0\ub294 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

TOEFL\uc5d0\uc11c \uac00\uc7a5 \ub192\uc740 \ud3c9\uac00\ub97c \ubc1b\ub294 \uae00\uc740 \ubcf4\ud1b5 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \ud45c\ud604\uc73c\ub85c \uad6c\uc131\ud55c \uae00\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\uc774 \uc810\uc740 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \uc694\uad6c\ud558\ub294 \uae00\uc4f0\uae30\uc640\ub294 \ub2e4\uc18c \ub2e4\ub97c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ub0b4\uc6a9 \uc911\uc2ec\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \ub354 \uc911\uc694\ud558\uac8c \ud3c9\uac00\ub418\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0\uac00 \ub9ce\uc9c0\ub9cc, TOEFL\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ud45c\ud604\ub825\uacfc \uc5b8\uc5b4 \uc6b4\uc6a9 \ub2a5\ub825\uc5d0 \ub354 \ud070 \ube44\uc911\uc774 \uc2e4\ub9bd\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\ub9cc\uc57d TOEFL Writing \uc810\uc218\uac00 \uc815\uccb4\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74, \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc5d0 \uc9c0\ub098\uce58\uac8c \uc9d1\uc911\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc744 \uac00\ub2a5\uc131\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201c\ub2e8\uc21c\ud558\uace0 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \uc88b\uc740 \ud45c\ud604\uc73c\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uac83\u201d<\/strong>\uc774 \uac00\ub2a5\ud574\uc9c0\uba74 \uc810\uc218\ub294 \uc790\uc5f0\uc2a4\ub7fd\uac8c \uc62c\ub77c\uac11\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\uc774 \uc6d0\uce59\uc740 Email Writing\uc774\ub4e0 Academic Discussion\uc774\ub4e0 \ub3d9\uc77c\ud558\uac8c \uc801\uc6a9\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\uc911\u00b7\uc0c1\uae09 \ubb38\ubc95 \ud14c\ud06c\ub2c9: \ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ubc95<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

\uc601\uc5b4\uc5d0\uc11c \ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc740 \uc911\u00b7\uc0c1\uae09 \ubb38\ubc95 \uc694\uc18c\ub85c \ubd84\ub958\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub97c \uc81c\ub300\ub85c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud558\ub824\uba74 \uae30\ubcf8\uc801\uc778 \ubb38\uc7a5 \uad6c\uc870\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc774\ud574\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uae30\ucd08\uac00 \uac16\ucd94\uc5b4\uc838 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \uacb0\ucf54 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6b4 \ubb38\ubc95\uc740 \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc801\uc808\ud788 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uac8c \ub418\uba74, \ubb38\uc7a5\uc758 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \ub2e4\uc591\ud558\uac8c \uad6c\uc131\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc73c\uba70 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ub97c \ubc18\ubcf5\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \ub2e8\uc870\ub85c\uc6b4 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc97\uc5b4\ub0a0 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\uc55e\uc11c \uac15\uc870\ud588\ub4ef\uc774, TOEFL\uc758 \uc8fc\uc694 \ud3c9\uac00 \uae30\uc900\uc740 \uc601\uc5b4 \ud45c\ud604\ub825\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7f0 \uc758\ubbf8\uc5d0\uc11c \ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc740 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \uac15\ub825\ud55c \ub3c4\uad6c\uac00 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubb3c\ub860 TOEFL\ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc77c\uc0c1\uc801\uc778 \uae00\uc4f0\uae30\ub098 \ube44\uc988\ub2c8\uc2a4 \ub77c\uc774\ud305\uc5d0\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc720\uc6a9\ud558\uac8c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ubb38\ubc95\uc774\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0, \uc775\ud600 \ub450\uba74 \ubd84\uba85 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\uc544\ub798\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc758 \ud575\uc2ec \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \uc815\ub9ac\ud574 \ubcf4\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uac01\uac01\uc758 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ubc95\uc744 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uae30 \uc804\uc5d0, \uba3c\uc800 \ub450 \ubb38\uc7a5\ubd80\ud638\uc758 \uae30\ubcf8\uc801\uc778 \uae30\ub2a5\uc744 \uac04\ub2e8\ud788 \uc18c\uac1c\ud558\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\t\n\n\t\n\t\n\t\n\t
\ubb38\uc7a5\ubd80\ud638<\/th>\uc0ac\uc6a9 \ubaa9\uc801<\/th>\uc124\uba85<\/th>\uc608\ubb38<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<\/thead>\n
\ucf5c\ub860 (:)<\/td>\ubaa9\ub85d \uc18c\uac1c<\/td>\uc55e \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \ubcf4\ucda9\ud558\uac70\ub098 \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \ud56d\ubaa9\uc744 \uc81c\uc2dc\ud560 \ub54c \uc0ac\uc6a9<\/td>The guide covers three areas: scheduling, documentation, and follow-up.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n
\uc138\ubd80 \uc815\ubcf4 \ucd94\uac00<\/td>\uc55e \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uad6c\uccb4\ud654\ud558\uac70\ub098 \uba85\ud655\ud788 \ud560 \ub54c \uc0ac\uc6a9<\/td>One issue remains: the lack of clear instructions.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n
\uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 (;)<\/td>\uc811\uc18d\uc0ac \ub300\uccb4<\/td>\uc758\ubbf8\uc0c1 \ubc00\uc811\ud558\uac8c \uc5f0\uacb0\ub41c \ub450 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc744 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud560 \ub54c \uc0ac\uc6a9<\/td>The meeting was delayed; several participants arrived late.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n
\ubcf5\uc7a1\ud55c \ubaa9\ub85d \uad6c\ubd84<\/td>\uc774\ubbf8 \uc27c\ud45c\uac00 \ud3ec\ud568\ub41c \ud56d\ubaa9\ub4e4\uc744 \uad6c\ubd84\ud560 \ub54c \uc0ac\uc6a9<\/td>The event includes speakers from Tokyo, Japan; Paris, France; and Berlin, Germany.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n\n\n\n\n

\uc774\uc81c\ubd80\ud130\ub294 \ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc2e4\uc81c\ub85c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \ud558\ub098\uc529 \uc790\uc138\ud788 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4!<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc758 \uacf5\ud1b5 \uaddc\uce59<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

\ucf5c\ub860\uc774\ub4e0 \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc774\ub4e0 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \uae30\uc5b5\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uaddc\uce59\uc774 \ud558\ub098 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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  • \ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 \uc55e\uc5d0\ub294 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808(\uc644\uc804\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5)\uc774 \uc640\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n

    \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc774\ub780, \uadf8\uac83\ub9cc\uc73c\ub85c\ub3c4 \ud558\ub098\uc758 \uc644\uc804\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc73c\ub85c \uc131\ub9bd\ud558\ub294 \uc758\ubbf8 \ub2e8\uc704\ub97c \ub9d0\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    \uc774\uc81c \uc608\ubb38\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc774 \uc2e4\uc81c\ub85c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\ub294\uc9c0 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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    Colon \uc608\ubb38<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    I have read your guide intended for new employees. However, I found room for improvement: structure and terminology.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

    \ucf5c\ub860 \uc55e\uc5d0 \uc624\ub294 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \u201cHowever, I found room for improvement.\u201d<\/strong>\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \uadf8 \uc790\uccb4\ub85c \uc644\uc804\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774\ubbc0\ub85c \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \uadf8 \ub4a4\uc5d0 \ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc62c\ubc14\ub978 \uad6c\uc870\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c \ucf5c\ub860\uc740 \u201c\uac1c\uc120\uc774 \ud544\uc694\ud55c \uc694\uc18c\u201d\ub97c \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub098\uc5f4\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc989, \uc55e \ubb38\uc7a5\uc758 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ubcf4\ucda9\ud558\uace0 \uad6c\uccb4\ud654\ud558\ub294 \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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    Semicolon \uc608\ubb38<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    Thank you for arranging the kick-off party for the upcoming conference. The atmosphere of the reserved restaurant was great; however, some of my colleagues mentioned that there wasn\u2019t enough food and drink for 30 people. For the next standing buffet, I recommend preparing more refreshments so that everyone will be satisfied.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

    \uc870\uae08 \uae34 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 \uc55e\uc5d0 \uc624\ub294 \ubd80\ubd84\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    \u201cThe atmosphere of the reserved restaurant was great.\u201d<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

    \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \uadf8 \uc790\uccb4\ub85c \uc644\uc804\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5, \uc989 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \uadf8 \ub4a4\uc5d0 \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc62c\ubc14\ub978 \uad6c\uc870\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    \uc774 \uc608\ubb38\uc5d0\uc11c \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc740 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\uc758 \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ub300\uc2e0\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    \ub4a4\uc5d0\uc11c \ub354 \uc790\uc138\ud788 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uaca0\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 + \ubd80\uc0ac(however, therefore, moreover \ub4f1)<\/strong>\uc758 \uc870\ud569\uc740 \uace0\uae09 \uc601\uc5b4\uc5d0\uc11c \ub9e4\uc6b0 \uc790\uc8fc \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\ub294 \ud45c\ud604 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \ubd80\uc0ac\ub97c \ud568\uaed8 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uba74, \uadf8 \ubd80\uc0ac\ub97c \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ucc98\ub7fc \ud65c\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    \uc704 \uc608\ubb38\uc5d0\uc11c \ubd80\uc0ac \u201chowever\u201d<\/em>\ub294 \uc6d0\ub798 \ub450 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc9c1\uc811 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud558\ub294 \uae30\ub2a5\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \ud568\uaed8 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\uba74\uc11c, \uc758\ubbf8\uc0c1\uc73c\ub85c\ub294 \u201cbut\u201d<\/em>\uc640 \uc720\uc0ac\ud55c \uc5f0\uacb0 \uae30\ub2a5\uc744 \uc218\ud589\ud558\uac8c \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

    \ucf5c\ub860 (:)<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

    \ucf5c\ub860\uc5d0\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec \uac00\uc9c0 \uae30\ub2a5\uc774 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ud2b9\ud788 \uc911\uc694\ud558\uace0 \ud65c\uc6a9\ub3c4\uac00 \ub192\uc740 \uc6a9\ubc95\uc740 \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc6b0\uc120 \uc774 \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0\ub97c \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \uc775\ud600 \ub450\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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    • \uc55e \uc808\uacfc \uad00\ub828\ub41c \ubaa9\ub85d\uc744 \ub3c4\uc785\ud560 \ub54c<\/li>\n\n\n\n
    • \uc55e \uc808\uacfc \uad00\ub828\ub41c \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc124\uba85\uc744 \ub367\ubd99\uc77c \ub54c<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n

      \ubaa9\ub85d \ub3c4\uc785<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

      \ucf5c\ub860\uc758 \uac00\uc7a5 \uae30\ubcf8\uc801\uc778 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ubc95\uc740 \ubaa9\ub85d\uc744 \uc18c\uac1c\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808 \ub4a4\uc5d0 \ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uba74, \uadf8 \ubb38\uc7a5\uacfc \uad00\ub828\ub41c \ud56d\ubaa9\ub4e4\uc744 \ub098\uc5f4\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

      \uc5ec\uae30\uc11c \ud575\uc2ec \ud3ec\uc778\ud2b8\ub294 \ub2e4\uc74c \uaddc\uce59\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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      \ucf5c\ub860 \uc55e\uc5d0\ub294 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808(\uc644\uc804\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5)\uc774 \uc640\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

      \uc774 \uaddc\uce59\uc744 \uc9c0\ud0a4\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc73c\uba74 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \ube44\ubb38\uc774 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc544\ub798\ub294 \uc774 \uaddc\uce59\uc744 \uc5b4\uaca8 \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ud2c0\ub9b0 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc758 \uc608\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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      • I like animals because of: their fluffiness and cuteness.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
      • Some of the important features of the system are: processing speed and usability.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

        \uc704 \ub450 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \ucf5c\ub860 \uc55e\ubd80\ubd84\uc774 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc774 \uc544\ub2c8\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ud2c0\ub9b0 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \uccab \ubc88\uc9f8 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \ubcf4\uba74, \u201cI like animals because of\u201d \ub294 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc774 \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \u201cbecause of\u201d\ub294 \uc804\uce58\uc0ac\uad6c\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0, \uadf8 \ub4a4\uc5d0 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \uba85\uc0ac\uac00 \uc640\uc57c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774 \uc644\uc131\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc5ec\uae30\uc11c\ub294 \ucf5c\ub860\uc73c\ub85c \ub04a\uc5b4\uc84c\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774 \ubbf8\uc644\uc131 \uc0c1\ud0dc\ub85c \ub05d\ub098 \ubc84\ub9bd\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \ub450 \ubc88\uc9f8 \ubb38\uc7a5\ub3c4 \ub9c8\ucc2c\uac00\uc9c0\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \u201cSome of the important features of the system are\u201d \uc5ed\uc2dc \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\ub85c \uc644\uc131\ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc558\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        be\ub3d9\uc0ac \ub4a4\uc5d0\ub294 \ubcf4\uc5b4(\ub610\ub294 \uc11c\uc220\uc5b4 \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ud558\ub294 \uc694\uc18c)\uac00 \uc640\uc57c \ud558\ub294\ub370, \uc5ec\uae30\uc11c\ub294 \uadf8 \ubd80\ubd84\uc774 \uc0dd\ub7b5\ub41c \ucc44 \ucf5c\ub860\uc73c\ub85c \uc774\uc5b4\uc84c\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ubd88\uc644\uc804\ud55c \uad6c\uc870\uac00 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \n

        Some of the important features of the system are highly visible: processing speed and usability.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

        \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ucf5c\ub860 \uc55e\uc758 \u201cSome of the important features of the system are highly visible\u201d \uac00 \uc644\uc804\ud55c \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\ub85c \uc131\ub9bd\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \uadf8 \ub4a4\uc5d0 \ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \uad00\ub828\ub41c \ud56d\ubaa9\uc744 \ub098\uc5f4\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc62c\ubc14\ub978 \uad6c\uc870\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \uc138\ubd80 \uc124\uba85 \ub3c4\uc785<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

        \ucf5c\ub860\uc758 \ubcf4\ub2e4 \uace0\uae09\uc2a4\ub7ec\uc6b4 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ubc95\uc740 \uc55e \ubb38\uc7a5\uc758 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc124\uba85\uc774\ub098 \uc138\ubd80 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ub3c4\uc785\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \uc774 \uc6a9\ubc95\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \ub54c\ub294 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \ucf5c\ub860 \ub4a4\uc758 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc774 \uc55e\uc5d0 \uc624\ub294 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc744 \uad6c\uccb4\ud654\ud558\uac70\ub098 \ubcf4\ucda9 \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2e8\uc21c\ud788 \uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc774\uc5b4 \ubd99\uc774\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ud5c8\uc6a9\ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \ub2e4\uc74c \uc608\ubb38\uc744 \ubcf4\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        <\/i><\/div>
        Wrong<\/span><\/div><\/div>
        \n

        Many people in my country celebrate the day: my family members gather at home.<\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

        \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \ucf5c\ub860 \uc55e\uc5d0 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc774 \uc624\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c\ub294 \ubb38\uc81c\uc5c6\uc5b4 \ubcf4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc0c1 \uc624\ub958\uac00 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \u201cMy family members gather at home\u201d\uc740 \u201cMany people in my country celebrate the day\u201d\uc758 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc124\uba85\uc774\ub098 \uc608\uc2dc\uac00 \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2e8\uc21c\ud788 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc0ac\ub840\ub97c \uc81c\uc2dc\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc77c \ubfd0, \uc55e \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc9c1\uc811\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ubcf4\ucda9\ud558\uac70\ub098 \uad6c\uccb4\ud654\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \uc758\ubbf8\uc0c1 \uc5f0\uacb0\uc774 \ubd80\uc790\uc5f0\uc2a4\ub7fd\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \n

        Many people in my country celebrate the day: houses and stores decorate their exterior walls and doors with colorful ornaments.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

        \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c \ucf5c\ub860 \ub4a4\uc758 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc740 \uc55e \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.
        \uc989, \u201c\uadf8 \ub0a0\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uae30\ub150\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\u201d\ub97c \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc608\uc2dc\ub85c \uc81c\uc2dc\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 (;)<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

        \ucf5c\ub860\uacfc \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc740 \ud615\ud0dc\ub294 \ube44\uc2b7\ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc758\ubbf8\uc640 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ubc95\uc740 \uc804\ud600 \ub2e4\ub985\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc801\uc808\ud788 \ud65c\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \ubb38\uc7a5 \ud45c\ud604\uc758 \ud3ed\uc744 \ud06c\uac8c \ub113\ud790 \uc218 \uc788\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 TOEFL Writing\uc5d0\uc11c \uc0c1\ub2f9\ud788 \uc720\ub9ac\ud558\uac8c \uc791\uc6a9\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \ub610\ud55c \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc740 \uae34 \uae00\uc774\ub098 \ud559\uc220\uc801\uc778 \uc9c0\ubb38\uc5d0\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc790\uc8fc \ub4f1\uc7a5\ud558\ub294 \ubb38\uc7a5\ubd80\ud638\uc774\ubbc0\ub85c, \uc0ac\uc6a9\ubc95\uc744 \uc54c\uace0 \uc788\uc73c\uba74 Reading\uc5d0\uc11c\ub3c4 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \ub354 \uc27d\uac8c \uc774\ud574\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

        \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc758 \ud575\uc2ec \uc6a9\ubc95 \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0\ub294 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \uae30\uc5b5\ud574 \ub450\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

          \n
        • \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ub97c \ub300\uc2e0\ud558\uc5ec \ub450 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc744 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud560 \ub54c<\/li>\n\n\n\n
        • \uc27c\ud45c\uac00 \uc774\ubbf8 \ud3ec\ud568\ub41c \ubcf5\uc7a1\ud55c \ud56d\ubaa9\ub4e4\uc744 \uad6c\ubd84\ud560 \ub54c<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n

          \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac \ub300\uc6a9<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

          \uc601\uc5b4 \uae30\ucd08 \ubb38\ubc95\uc758 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc6d0\uce59 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

          \n

          \ub450 \uac1c\uc758 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc744 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud560 \ub54c\ub294 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

          \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uace0 \uc27c\ud45c(,)\ub9cc\uc73c\ub85c \ub450 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud558\uba74, \uc774\ub294 Comma splice<\/strong> \ub610\ub294 Run-on sentence error<\/strong>\ub77c\uace0 \ubd88\ub9ac\ub294 \ubb38\ubc95 \uc624\ub958\uac00 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

          \ub2e4\uc74c\uc740 \uc27c\ud45c\ub9cc \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574 \ub450 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc744 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud55c \uc798\ubabb\ub41c \uc608\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

          <\/i><\/div>
          Wrong<\/span><\/div><\/div>
          \n

          My colleagues are eager to participate in the networking event, they are willing to expand their business network.<\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

          \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \ub450 \uac1c\uc758 \uc644\uc804\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc27c\ud45c \ud558\ub098\ub85c\ub9cc \uc5f0\uacb0\ud588\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ud2c0\ub9b0 \uad6c\uc870\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

          \uc6d0\uce59\uc801\uc73c\ub85c\ub294 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574\uc57c \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac \ub300\uc2e0 \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860(;)<\/strong>\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \ub2e8\ub3c5\uc73c\ub85c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uacbd\uc6b0, \uc758\ubbf8\uc0c1\uc73c\ub85c\ub294 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

            \n
          • and<\/li>\n\n\n\n
          • but<\/li>\n\n\n\n
          • because<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n

            \ub2e4\ub9cc \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac \uc758\ubbf8\ub85c \ud574\uc11d\ud560\uc9c0\ub294 \ub3c5\uc790\uc5d0\uac8c \ub9e1\uaca8\uc9c0\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0, \ub450 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc758 \uc758\ubbf8 \uad00\uacc4\uac00 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \uba85\ud655\ud560 \ub54c\ub9cc \ub2e8\ub3c5 \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc801\uc808\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

            \uc704\uc758 \uc798\ubabb\ub41c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc73c\ub85c \uace0\uce58\uba74 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

            \n

            My colleagues are eager to participate in the networking event; they are willing to expand their business network.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

            \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc774 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac(\uc774 \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0\ub294 and)\uc5d0 \ud574\ub2f9\ud558\ub294 \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ud558\uba70, \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc62c\ubc14\ub978 \uad6c\uc870\uac00 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

            \ud45c\ud604\uc758 \ud3ed\uc744 \ub113\ud788\ub294 \u300c\uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 + \ubd80\uc0ac + \uc27c\ud45c\u300d<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

            \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc758 \uace0\uae09 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ubc95 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294\u300c\uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 + \ubd80\uc0ac + \uc27c\ud45c\u300d \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

            \uc774 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uba74 \uac70\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc5f0\uacb0 \ubd80\uc0ac\ub97c \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ucc98\ub7fc \ud65c\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uac8c \ub418\uba70, \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\uc5d0 \uc758\uc874\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uace0\ub3c4 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc790\uc5f0\uc2a4\ub7fd\uac8c \uc774\uc5b4 \uac08 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

            \uac00\uc7a5 \ub300\ud45c\uc801\uc778 \uc608\uac00 \ubc14\ub85c \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \ud45c\ud604\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

            \n

            ; however,<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

            \ub9ce\uc740 \ud559\uc2b5\uc790\ub4e4\uc774 \ud63c\ub3d9\ud558\ub294 \ubd80\ubd84\uc774\uc9c0\ub9cc, however\ub294 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\uac00 \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \ubd80\uc0ac\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

            \ub530\ub77c\uc11c however \ub2e8\ub3c5\uc73c\ub85c \ub450 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud558\uba74 \ubb38\ubc95\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ud2c0\ub9b0 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

            <\/i><\/div>
            Wrong<\/span><\/div><\/div>
            \n

            I personally think that your presentation was excellent, however some of my colleagues didn\u2019t seem so.<\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

            \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \ub450 \uac1c\uc758 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\ub85c \uc774\ub8e8\uc5b4\uc838 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \n
            • I personally think that your presentation was excellent.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
            • Some of my colleagues didn\u2019t seem so.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n

              \uc55e\uc11c \uc124\uba85\ud588\ub4ef\uc774, \ub450 \uac1c\uc758 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc744 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud558\ub824\uba74 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ub098 \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\uac00 \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \ubd80\uc0ac however\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \uc5f0\uacb0\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \ubd80\uc0ac\ub294 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ucc98\ub7fc \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc744 \uc9c1\uc811 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud558\ub294 \uae30\ub2a5\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uc9c0 \uc54a\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0, \uc774\ub294 \ubb38\ubc95 \uc624\ub958\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc624\ub958\ub294 comma splice\uc758 \ud55c \ud615\ud0dc\ub85c \ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \n

              I personally think that your presentation was excellent; however, some of my colleagues didn\u2019t seem so.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

              \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 + \ubd80\uc0ac + \uc27c\ud45c \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \uc5ec\uae30\uc11c ; however, \ub294 \uc758\ubbf8\uc0c1 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac but\uc640 \uc720\uc0ac\ud55c \uae30\ub2a5\uc744 \uc218\ud589\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc774 \ub450 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc808\uc744 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud558\uace0, \ubd80\uc0ac however\uac00 \ub17c\ub9ac\uc801 \uc804\ud658(\ub300\uc870)\uc744 \uba85\ud655\ud788 \ud574 \uc90d\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              <\/i>

              \u300c\uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 + \ubd80\uc0ac + \uc27c\ud45c\u300d\ub97c \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ucc98\ub7fc \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uae30<\/h4><\/div>
              \n

              \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uba74, \uac70\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc5f0\uacb0 \ubd80\uc0ac\ub97c \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ucc98\ub7fc \ud65c\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 + \ubd80\uc0ac + \uc27c\ud45c<\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

              \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\ub97c \uc9c0\ub098\uce58\uac8c \ubc18\ubcf5\ud558\uba74 \uae00\uc774 \ub2e8\uc870\ub86d\uace0 \uc720\uce58\ud574 \ubcf4\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubc18\uba74, \u300c\uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860 + \ubd80\uc0ac + \uc27c\ud45c\u300d \uad6c\uc870\ub294 \uc811\uc18d\uc0ac\uc758 \ub300\uc6a9\uc73c\ub85c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc5b4 \ud6e8\uc52c \uc138\ub828\ub41c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \ub9cc\ub4e4 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. TOEFL Writing\uc5d0\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc801\uc808\ud788 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uba74 \ud45c\ud604\uc758 \ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uacfc \ubb38\uc7a5 \uad6c\uc870\uc758 \uc218\uc900\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc5b4 \uae0d\uc815\uc801\uc778 \ud3c9\uac00\ub85c \uc774\uc5b4\uc9c8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \ub9ac\uc2a4\ud2b8 \ub0b4\uc758 \ubcf5\uc7a1\ud55c \uc694\uc18c \uad6c\ubd84<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

              \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc758 \ub610 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc6a9\ubc95\uc740 \ub9ac\uc2a4\ud2b8 \uc548\uc5d0 \uc774\ubbf8 \uc27c\ud45c\uac00 \ud3ec\ud568\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uc744 \ub54c, \ud56d\ubaa9\uc744 \uba85\ud655\ud788 \uad6c\ubd84\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ubaa9\ub85d\uc744 \ub098\uc5f4\ud560 \ub54c\ub294 \uc27c\ud45c\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ub098 \ud56d\uc0c1 \uc27c\ud45c\ub9cc \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc801\uc808\ud560\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \ub2e4\uc74c \uc608\ubb38\uc744 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              <\/i><\/div>
              Wrong<\/span><\/div><\/div>
              \n

              I have lived in several countries, Indiana, America, London, England, and Saskatchewan, Canada.<\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

              \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ub9ac\uc2a4\ud2b8\uc758 \uac01 \uc694\uc18c\uac00 \u201c\ub3c4\uc2dc(\ub610\ub294 \uc8fc) + \uad6d\uac00\u201d<\/strong>\uc758 \ud615\ud0dc\ub85c \uc774\ub8e8\uc5b4\uc838 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4 \uccab \ubc88\uc9f8 \uc694\uc18c\ub294 \u201cIndiana, America\u201d\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \uc774 \uc608\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ube44\uad50\uc801 \uc798 \uc54c\ub824\uc9c4 \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc774\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub290 \ubd80\ubd84\uc774 \ud558\ub098\uc758 \ub2e8\uc704\uc778\uc9c0 \ucd94\uce21\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \ub35c \uc54c\ub824\uc9c4 \ub3c4\uc2dc\uc640 \uad6d\uac00\uac00 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub41c\ub2e4\uba74 \uc5b4\ub5a8\uae4c\uc694? \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ud56d\ubaa9\uc774 \uc27c\ud45c\ub85c\ub9cc \uad6c\ubd84\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub514\uc11c \ud558\ub098\uc758 \ub2e8\uc704\uac00 \ub05d\ub098\ub294\uc9c0 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \ud63c\ub780\uc2a4\ub7ec\uc6b8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \uc774 \ubb38\uc81c\ub97c \ud574\uacb0\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc27c\ud45c \ub300\uc2e0 \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

              \n

              I have lived in several countries, Indiana, America; London, England; and Saskatchewan, Canada.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n

              \uc138\ubbf8\ucf5c\ub860\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \uac01 \ud56d\ubaa9\uc758 \uacbd\uacc4\uac00 \ud6e8\uc52c \uba85\ud655\ud574\uc84c\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uc81c \u201c\ub3c4\uc2dc + \uad6d\uac00\u201d\uac00 \ud558\ub098\uc758 \ubb36\uc74c\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ubd84\uba85\ud558\uac8c \ub4dc\ub7ec\ub0a9\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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